Friday 12 November 2010

My name is Nouf (8)

I miss you readers!! why don't you comment like before anymore? :( is anyone even reading the story ? :O hellooo? hellooo? *waves*... *cries* I miss everyone! why did you all dissapear? bloggers and readers!! what happend to last year's bloggers? :'( they all have dissapeard! no one writes anymore! no one comments! everyone has deserted blogs and moved to the so called twitter! wai3, I hate it, its lame :( ... if anyone is still reading this blog please leave a comment saying I'm still into blogs! what happened to all the story writers? I remember how many were there! mashallaa I couldn't catch up! wain ri7taw? habba much? :/ moi za3lana....



part eight...


I wrapped my arms around myself and kept them there for a while. A sudden wave of embarrassment mixed with insecurity hit me right there and then. This stranger had witnessed the worst of me and I wished that this was the last time that I'll ever see him yet I had to express my gratitude for what he had done to me. Okay that wasn’t entirely the truth; I actually wanted to talk to him because for one I wanted to save what was left of my image as a sane person. I bet he thought I was a pathetic suicidal woman who lacked faith and talking to him might cure my…boredom.



I picked up the first cardigan my eyes laid on and draped it over my arm, not bothering actually wearing it. I was aware of how horrible I looked so I skipped looking at the mirror.


I wiped my mouth with the back of my hand, picked up my hotel room's pass in key and left my junior suite.



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 The cold breeze stroked my bare face gently, sending shivers down my spine and making the hairs on the back of my neck stand up. My exposed chest bones ached slightly and I buttoned up my cardigan hoping that I would warm up.

 
I walked slowly past the large swimming pool and paused for a moment. I could see him from where I stood. He was typing something on his laptop and looking completely distracted. that was when it suddenly hit me;coming here was the stupidest idea and I must turn back slowly before he noticed I was here.

 

I turned around and tiptoed my way back to the hotel, I didn’t want to make any noise fearing from him noticing me. I didn’t realize how wet the smooth ground was until my feet skidded; I fell over and landed hard on my butt.

No no no nooo this didn't just happened , oh dear lord why me?
Talk about embarrassment.

"Are you okay?" the stranger called out for me. My face started giving out a hundred shades of red and I wished that the ground would open up and swallow me whole! This couldn’t get any worse! Damn you Nouf for "thinking" of coming down here in the first place!

Oh god this was horribly embarrassing but I couldn’t show him how embarrassed and hurt I was, so I got up slowly, smoothed my pants with my fingers and my now all over the place hair.

"I'm fine" I smiled widely with fake confidence.
Ouch my butt hurt!

"Caution, wet floor" he said with full seriousness but I could see a hint of a smile at the corner of his mouth.


"Oh that, I was just-"

 
"Testing the gravity?" he raised an eyebrow. He stood so tall, towering over me and I loathed it. I loathed him despite the fact that I didn't know him.

 

"Fine! 6i7t, so what?" I was getting furious; he cannot think what just happened was funny! It wasn’t! Okay, maybe a little if my butt didn't hurt so much!

"salamat" he said.

 

" allaah ysalmik" I muttered awkwardly, my face burned with embarrassment and I wasn’t so cold anymore. I wished my phone was with me so I could do what I usually did in awkward situations; pretending to text people.

 
"Sagir" he said.

 

"na3am?" I asked stupidly.
"My name is sagir, and yours?"

"Oh. its...Nouf"
"Nice to meet you Nouf" he smiled. The feeling is not mutual I thought.
"Look I'm sorry I interrupted whatever you were doing... I better head back to my room and…thank you for …um…what happened earlier today." I stuttered breathlessly. I turned around quickly to head my way back inside the hotel but was very surprised when I felt his hand on my shoulder.

"wait..."


oh crap! what did he want from me now?!




to be continued...


31 comments:

Charlie said...

now i actually want to know

moi said...

charlie: next part's coming soon.

Anonymous said...

Loool maskena tfashelat post sooon

Um flfola

Anonymous said...

i loooooooooooove ur blog!!! and loving this story, keep up the good work!! :D

Anonymous said...

I read the post, ma estaw3abt ena kintaye katba shaye in the beginning ba3dain i opened it again o garaita chan agoul 7ag nafsy afah 3alaich al7een i comment! testahlain :* one of the first blogs i ever read o am still reading :D and with that i end the story of my life x_x

Anonymous said...

I still read:D
Pleaseee post asap:(
No more bloggers those days (n)
Aby a3arf shiseer plzz:(

-Jazzy xx

Anonymous said...

True ma boga a7ad min last years bloggers but it's better to have them on twitter than ena manadre 3anhum wala nsma3 minhum Shay :(
I still love blogger w yalait they come back bas what are we going to do! Even love;** came back then she stopped blogging again :(
Elwa7ed etha ketab wehwa mo mshte chances are the material is gonna suck
-H

Yas said...

:D luvv the story!!! Post more soon...please :)

Dreamer;* said...

i read your storyyy!:p more like addicted to be precise..
and i hate twitter =D

Zaina said...

I read your blog:P and your storrryyy... eeeh! kilman left! no one blogs anymore!

Anonymous said...

L.O.V.E IT!!! Nabi update very soon plzzzzz!

zuz said...

lesh etzifeeenaaa? :p i still read ur blogggg o i looove this story! bs za3lana lesh tel6i3eena la63a 3la matnazleen post yedeed ;p eee ee :P

moi said...

um flfoola: enshalla :)


anon: thank youuuu 7abaybee ee chethii raf3aw elma3naweyat ;p :*


littlethings: hehe ur adorable! ;**


jazzy: I'll post it sooon :*

moi said...

H: ab. agree with u! i miss everyone so much :(


yas: sure :)

dreamer: haha the comments post is nothing without ur lovely comments :*



zainaaaa: hii :D ;p


anon: 3ala hl khashim ;p


zuz: loool sorryyy zuzyy, akhir mrra ma 3eeedhaaa ;p

Sugar.Free said...

im still heree reading ur storyy! and
i love it!

cant wait!

Sugar.Free said...

im still heree reading ur storyy! and
i love it!

cant wait!

Anonymous said...

Moii!! Yawaaailiich if u quit!! I always READ ALWAYYYS!! Aslan ma agdar i dont read!! Bs mu kil mara i comment;$
Kilma tamait i reopen the old posts oo ;D i relive ayam ili kinaa nityama3 ib our breaks to read ur story as a group 3ashan ngool rayna ib the events that happened!!
Ur the Bestest blogger;**
love ur stories oo u aked!! Plzzz post soonn!!

Sabeehah said...

Really love ur story so far:) I dont speak arabic so in ur posts i sometyms hv2 assume d meaning of some of d words but even That doesn deter me frm ardently followin d story! keep up d excellent work :)

Anonymous said...

Moi, I always read your stories, they are great! And I am more into blogs, I don't like twitter. I don't really care to know what someone had for lunch or what they are watching on tv :/ lol. So please keep posting for us who follow your blog :) anony f

Standy said...

i agree with you, people deserted thier blogs and stories and the place is pretty much dead!!


i read but i dont comment much adn heere is a comment 3ahanish =*

Diet Coke said...

I'm still into blogs;p don't worry ur stories are great keep going

Anonymous said...

waiting 4 nouf 9

Anonymous said...

О! Sie haben einige schöne Punkte gibt. Ich habe eine Suche über den Gegenstand und fand vor allem die Menschen mit Ihrem Blog Zustimmung.

Anonymous said...

What a nice post. I really love reading these types or articles. I can?t wait to see what others have to say..

F. said...

Mashallah Mashllah, your a great writer! Keep on going, I always look forward for your blogs!

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